I think our final performance had good emotional connection with our stimulus. Our story was clear and it felt like everyone got the meaning behind what we were doing. The poppies worked well as a way of enhancing our movements. I felt focused throughout and like we really knew what we were doing.
From watching other people's work in our class I feel we could have incorporated more lifts. We had limited contact work which I think could have developed our story more and made our piece a long physically stronger. It felt like we hadn't taken enough risks.
Technically, our music didn't run perfectly. If I was to use two different songs again I would probably try edit them together on CD and have my own CD player to use in assessments in order to avoid technical difficulties getting in the way of our performance.
I also think we could have used our voices more. We only said two sentences throughout the piece. I think those pieces worked but we need to use our voices more to tell the story better. It would have been nice to develop more of a relationship between our two characters, as it felt like we represented the same person. Overall our performance was ok, but there was a few small things we could have done to improve it a lot.
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